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Tuesday, August 11, 2015

What Is A Star?.....

What Is A Star?
The Star is a shiny piece of diamond made from gold.
It is a mirror reflecting on the sun to make it shine hard.
The Star is a silver coin pushed into a drain of sorrows,happiness and wonder
It is a formation of pictures and Matariki.

The Star is as bright as the sun in the day.

 I have chosen this document because I am happy with what I have done and I had made it my best work.I enjoyed doing this poem because I was really looking foward to this I really hope we do another one
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9 comments:

  1. UnknownAugust 11, 2015 at 2:25 PM

    wow annie well i love your work

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  2. UnknownAugust 11, 2015 at 2:26 PM

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  3. UnknownAugust 11, 2015 at 2:43 PM

    Nice work Annie i like your similes and that is a good job keep it up!!

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  4. UnknownAugust 11, 2015 at 2:43 PM

    Nice work Annie i like your similes and that is a good job keep it up!!

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  5. UnknownAugust 12, 2015 at 7:13 PM

    WOW! Annie you have better work than I thought I LOVE YOUR FACTS ON STARS! :O :D

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  6. UnknownAugust 18, 2015 at 10:51 AM

    nice work Annie and a star is like gold

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    1. UnknownAugust 18, 2015 at 5:13 PM

      Thanks Cruz but I think I don't need to know it twice......Wait or do I ?

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    2. UnknownAugust 18, 2015 at 5:14 PM

      Thanks Cruz but I think I don't need to know it twice......Wait or do I ?

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  7. UnknownAugust 18, 2015 at 10:51 AM

    nice work Annie and a star is like gold

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